Effective Persuasion I See Why Others Choose to Die written by Jerry Fensterman was a very touching essay. Jerry Fensterman had written this essay after he was diagnosed with cancer. Out of the four essays I choose to write about this one because I believe Jerry Fensterman has made a valid and remarkable point on the issue of physician-assisted suicide. I agree with Jerry Fensterman when he states knowing the feeling, loving, rational person could choose death over life. Fensterman has definitely been through a lot of pain and stuck it out so he has every right to make a statement like that.
Even though he can see how a rational person could choose death over life he had said personally that he was not against physical-assisted suicide. Just if it were available to him at that time that he would not have choose that route. Reading Fensterman’s essay has defiantly persuaded me. He used very strong and emotional words that grabbed my attention. He explains what a burden he is, not only to himself but to friends, family, and loved ones. Jerry Fensterman explains a lot of things having to do with physical and emotional pain. I took a liking to this in particular essay because it was so personal.
This man knew what he was talking about and his own experience was his evidence and facts. To be able to have a personal experience so close or right on the subject matter that is taking place is easier to make a stronger opinion. Writepoint Feedback Writepoint is my magic highlighter. I think it is great that we have Writepoint as a tool for or college papers. Writpoint points out and recognizes errors that are most commonly made. I really like how this tool suggests comments and possible changes to the paper whether it is toward grammar and style.
When I received my feedback from Writepoint on my Effective Persuasion paper I notice that there can be correction made to it. Taking in the comments and suggestions now will better my writing in the future. The first mistake starts in the beginning on my paragraph. I am not aware when I am writing in a passive voice. That is something I need to work on to make sure my writing is not tedious to read. I also have a bad habit of dividing two-part verbs and I use the word definitely too often. I need to watch out for using the same words and phrases excessively.
I do not want my audience to get bored with my writing. By using a bit more of my vocabulary I can keep my essay entertaining and this may help persuade my readers more. Effective Essay There are many steps involved to make sure that I write an effective essay that will persuade my readers. I will be sure that my writing is clear to understand. I am going to approach my argument with commitment and enthusiasm. No matter how strongly I feel about the topic, if I don’t provide solid and real support for my position, I will not convince anyone to see my point of view my way.
Using information that will be most convincing to my readers is a strategy that I will take. Having supporting evidence for my reasons will also help persuade my readers. Examples and expert opinions will make my final paper effective as well. To make sure my paper is not interpreted as bias I have to consider the opposing position. I do not want to leave my argument unprotected, so I will defend my position by showing some weakness in the opposing position. Most important will be arranging my reasons and evidence so that they build the strongest case form my position and save the most convincing reason for last.